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on: Apr 16, 2014
ratings: 2

language: en

SHe met you.
SHe got your number.
SHe started talking to you...
SHe got to know you.
SHe became your friend.
SHe started to like you.
SHe loved talking to you.
SHe started to chase you.
SHe wanted to spend time with you.
SHe started missing you...
SHe made you fall.
SHe wanted you.
SHe got it in with you.
SHe became more than a friend.
SHe finally got you.
SHe fell in love with you...
SHe couldn't stopped talking to you.
SHe loved being around you.
SHe started acting different.
SHe seemed more distant.
SHe started to ignore you.
SHe got bored...
SHe stopped showing she cared.
SHe left.
You still miss her !!!
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score: 9.71745

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on: Apr 16, 2014
ratings: 14

language: en

A hollow laughter left my lips...
I tried hard to smile...but it was impossible..
to fight back the tears...
What has happened to the people around..??
Or..wait...am I wrong in judging them...???
Aah ! Yes..of course....
I am wrong....
I never felt..behind the fake smiles...and..
The plastic masks...that they wear...
A deceitful mind prevails...
Am I stupid or so naive...
That I don't find the difference..between...
the truth and the falsehood....
The bitching remains...
backstabbing goes on...
Yet with a pretty smile on the face..
And I am sent for a toss...
Is it time for me to leave....
this world...the virtual one..
which once was my own..??
Say a goodbye to everyone around...
And retire into my old shell...from
where I arrived...
My world...came crashing down..
and left me shattered...
Will I ever be able to join the
pieces together..???
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on: Apr 16, 2014
ratings: 2

tags: .
language: en

haryanvi engish
start :- सटारट
tire :- टैर
packet :-पैटक
polish :- पालश
chance :- चानस
rivet :- रिपट
gear :- गेर
stove :- स्टोप
rod :- राड
drum :- ड्राम
rupee :- रपिया
Some Interesting Translationsball :- खिन्न
ुkiss :- मट्ठो
small wall :- ओटड़ा
window :-जंगला
rain :- मीह
anger :- छोह
roof :-छांत
bread :- टीकड़े
wrought iron :- डेगचून
chaarpai :- खाट
quilt :-सोड़ /गदेला
bed :-गूदड़ा
dung heap :-बिटोड़ा
Stairs:- पडकाला
cattle :-डांगर
husband :- खसम
class :- जमात
fool :- आड
़ूgood :- एंडी /चोखा
cow :- गावड़ी
bhains :-डाँख
niche :- आला
music system :- बाजा
eyes :- दीदे
nose :- नास
face :- थोबड़ा
injection :-नस्तर
naughtiness :-आल ,अलबाद
bull :- बुलध
here :- याड
़ेthere :- उडे
cattle fodder :-भरोटा
dried dung :- गोस्सा
rope :- जेवड़ी
oath :- सूं
human back :- कड़
extreme :-कसूता
mud :- गार
ornaments :-टूम
totally :- जमा ऐ
earthquake :- हल्लण
to meet :-फेटन
preferred fighting language :-तेरी जाड़ा पै मारूँगा
preferred fighting reply :-तेरी न्हास्सा नै फोड़ द
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score: 9.48946

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on: Apr 15, 2014
ratings: 5

language: en

It was auspicious day
Special one and called wedding day
We had met some months earlier
Now it was reality and we were merrier

We had taken oath in presence of moon
We had so much in common
She used to say it often
“We will meet here again”

The stars are blessing us
We had enough of confidence and trust
Parents too had offered their best wishes
We were ready to give new color and finish

“The bond is decided by almighty”
We always believed it and felt happy
I was considering my self lucky
Even though the marriage problem was tricky

We are husband and wife today
We have found new opening anyway
We shall celebrate it as honeymoon
Two souls together with happy ending soon

I am unsure of what will it look like
The idea never enter mind to strike
Even though I had dreamed about happy moment
I sincerely thanked and considered it as heavenly sent
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score: 9.37792

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on: Apr 15, 2014
ratings: 3

tags: dips
language: en

Weeds throughout the soil of the enclosure.
At the feet of costly plants of the gardener.
Absolutely useless and worthless growth.
They may be termed as wild, all loath.
But still they try to rub shoulders.
With beautiful, wonderful partners.
But resents our gardener.

He mercilessly uproots.

The weeds too have a genre.
The soil is their mother.
Can you now justify the murder?

© Deepankar Choudhury

This poem is dedicated to all my teacher friends.
This is also dedicated to all who support capital punishment.
This poem is dedicated to all advocates of Darwinism.
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score: 9.53147

by: ammu
average: 10.0

on: Apr 15, 2014
ratings: 6

tags: Mom
language: en

My Mom is very kind to me
She is always busy like a bee
She has helped me through a lot of troubles
And put me in a sea of bubbles
She loves me very much
And that is why she is such
A lovely Mom..............!
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score: 9.30162

average: 10.0

on: Apr 15, 2014
ratings: 1

language: en

तेरे प्यारमे


प्यार मेरे दिवाना, यार का हे याराना,

घुम रहा हु गगनमे हो कर मै मस्ताना,

सुरज पिता आगबबुला हुए क्रोधित होकर मेरे पीछे पडे,

बडे भैया( हनुमानजी) पर्वत लेकर कुदे आसमान,

धरती्मा बचाने बीचमे आयी,

मानवका मन हे उदार, दीया मश्वरा एक उधार,

चला तु जा शिवजी के पास, पनाह देगा वो सबका नाथ,

आध्य शक्ति मा पार्वती, करे रक्षा तेरी हर काल,

बचा लेंगे ग्रहळ से तुझे, क्षीळ नही होने देंगे तुझे.

चांदनी लगे हुमे को प्यारी,

देना हमे ये उपहार कभी कभी.

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score: 9.81722

average: 10.0

on: Apr 15, 2014
ratings: 26

language: en

Have u ever tried tearing a piece of paper...
Its so easy and simple...
But tearing someone's body..
Oh my god...the blood oozing...
The flesh and tissues seen..
Isn't it a ghastly sight..??
Of course...yes...
What if someone breaks your heart..?
The hurt is not seen....
But internally... the bruises...never heal..
They can not be stitched, joined at all..
The lump in the throat...the muffled voice..
The cry is not heard..the tears unseen..
The thoughts turn and turn over..
riding a roller-coaster...
Never to end....
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score: 9.56709

average: 10.0

on: Apr 14, 2014
ratings: 7

tags: sajanee
language: en

तेरे प्यारमे


सजनी मेरे संग रहना,

साथ हमारे चलना,

लाउंगा कंगना तेरे लिये,

लगाउगा टिका सर पे,

पहेनाउगा हार गलेमे,

क्युकी बसा लिया हे तुने मुझे दिलमे,

लाउगा झांझर तेरे लिये,

तु ठ्न की रहे मेरे कानोमे

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score: 9.39981

average: 9.75

on: Apr 13, 2014
ratings: 5

language: en

He was in full rage
The words can not be put on page
It was full of filthy test
I tried to stop him at my best

Neither was he drunk
Nor under spell to sink
The inner grudge had spelled out
What he could not was now in full burst

I heard him saying all nonsense
But could do nothing as he was out of sense
He omitted complete venom
The words can be forgotten seldom

Yes sometimes it is helplessness
Man can not speak openly on face
He has some compulsion
He thinks much of the time with confusion

I thought for awhile
And felt relieved with smile
He had spoken with full ire
I realized its essence and admired

He was misguided
Now I have time to be confided
I decided call him and make thing clear
He need not keep any kind of fear

We sat for break fast and conversed
He was feeling guilty and offered
An apology for spoken ill words
I told him to forget and look forward

He did nothing to speak again
He was in agony and pain
I felt he was in remorse
I forgave him from heart of course
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score: 9.30162

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on: Apr 13, 2014
ratings: 1

tags: Poem
language: en

Do not love half lovers
Do not entertain half friends
Do not indulge in works of the half talented
Do not live half a life
and do not die a half death
If you choose silence, then be silent
When you speak, do so until you are finished
Do not silence yourself to say something
And do not speak to be silent
If you accept, then express it bluntly
Do not mask it
If you refuse then be clear about it
for an ambiguous refusal is but a weak acceptance
Do not accept half a solution
Do not believe half truths
Do not dream half a dream
Do not fantasize about half hopes
Half a drink will not quench your thirst
Half a meal will not satiate your hunger
Half the way will get you no where
Half an idea will bear you no results
Your other half is not the one you love
It is you in another time yet in the same space
It is you when you are not
Half a life is a life you didn't live,
A word you have not said
A smile you postponed
A love you have not had
A friendship you did not know
To reach and not arrive
Work and not work
Attend only to be absent
What makes you a stranger to them closest to you
and they strangers to you
The half is a mere moment of inability
but you are able for you are not half a being
You are a whole that exists to live a life
not half a life

-Gibran Khalil Gibran-
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score: 9.53147

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 6

tags: NATURE
language: en

jhoomti hui hawa ya madhham madham saba
kahte hain darakht suno mahka mahka sama

kudrat kya kahti hai kaise kahti hai kyun kahti hai
ye to uparvale ki awaaz hai jo hamesha kayam rahti hai

ye ek sada hai jo har dil me palti hai
ye ek ada hai jo har dil ki sunti hai

kahin nadi ka kal kal pani to kahin dhandhi meethi pawan
kahin sunhari shaam ka manzar aaftab ka mamnoon andaaz

kahin pahadon ke beech gaanv koi to kahin gaanvon ka pahaad
kahin parwaton ke saaye me sooraj ki parchhayiyun ka bhaav

kudrat ek shayri hai jise Khuda roz likhta hai
kudrat ek aashiqui hai jisme Khudaai ka ehsaas palta hai

saveron ki chhuvan saveron ki taazgi mano har oor hui ikhlaaq ki barsaat si

mithaas iski mahsoos karen to madhoshi roshni bhi sharma jaye
ye ek sada hai jo khumari se uthti hai khwaab me khoti hai

dharti gagan hawa pawan ye sab prakrati ke phool hain
inke ehsaas hi gulon ki khushbu aur gulshan ka usool hain
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score: 9.64749

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 10

language: en

He stands, a patient figure, where the crowd
Heaves to and fro; a sound is in his ears
As of a vexed sea roaring, and he hears
In darkness, as a dead man in his shroud.
Patient he stands, with age and sorrow bowed,
And holds a piteous hat of ancient years;
And in his face and gesture there appears
The desperate humbleness of poor men proud

What thoughts are his, as, with the inward sight,
He sees the glad unheeding Fair go by?
Is the long darkness darker for that light
And sorrow nearer when such mirth is nigh?
Patient, alone, he stands from morn to night,
Pleading in his reproachful misery.
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score: 9.49492

average: 9.625

on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 17

tags: Selfish
language: en

Sometimes I'm left wondering -
Did you enslave me or did you set me free?
Your selfish actions posed as my best company.
A sense of power is what you gave to me;
In return, I granted you a sense of relief.
It was some kind of silent agreement that we reached.
It was some kind of agreement begging to be breached.
I still think of you sometimes, and I have to ask,
"What was he thinking when he did that?"
It disturbs me that most of it was just an act.
It hurts me that you didn't use more tact.
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score: 9.73081

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 15

language: en

I hear the striking waves
From sea and blame
The distance is so much
I can not see her as such

I imagine her at another end
Touching the waves to send
Her feelings through waves around
I have nice means to have found

I go in morning to the beach
Synchronize her time to reach
Touch the water and feel pulse
Her heart beats are felt of course

Such is an imagination
It is sign of bond and relation
We have not seen each other
But feel with sky’s over cover

I imagine her whisper
With lovely sweet offer
“Do not go away” when water recedes
I feel sad and slowly concede

I have reason to be upset
She is in time and never late
I used to tell her and simply state
Do you feel the same destiny and fate?
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score: 9.30162

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 2

language: en

"I am and sorry you are not feeling well. I am praying for you to have a complete and quick recovery."
"I just wanted to write you to encourage you to stay strong and to let you know you are in my thoughts prayers."
"I am sorry to hear that you are not feeling well. Get well soon!"
"I am praying for a quick recovery for you. Get better and make my prayers come true."
"I know that everyone gets sick sometimes. I just don't like to see someone as nice as you suffer. Get well!"
"Get well soon, so I can come over and bother you.
"I was starting to think that you are invincible. It's good to know that you are human after all. I'm looking forward to you getting back to your invincible self. Get well soon, superman." (For a tough person)
"You are in my thoughts and my prayers. I am praying for a quick recovery."
"If you weren't so likable, then maybe those darn germs wouldn't like you so much. Hoping you more offensive... at least to the germs."
"I'm sending you warm regards, and I hope that you will get well soon."
"I am praying that you have the strength and the peace to get you though your illness.
"If I told you to 'Get Well Soon,' it wouldn't be soon enough. Get Well Now! I cant see a tiger like u sitting quiet and not roaring like before.when u were not at home the house looked like a haunted place ..Dad our house stands only because u r there ..i use to love vn u use to tell mom that iam ur son and she used to get annoyed and always said u r spoiling me but u never let me spoil..u gave me everything ..i can tell u dad that no ones dad is as wonderful as u ..i remember late night u use to call the ice cream parlour only because I wanted ice cream u never said its late have it tomorrow..I have no words to say or describe you dad how good and the Best husband u r and a wonderful father you are ..and a very kind Officer to u subordinates u were ..i have never seen u degrading anyone you never loose ur cool no matter how much pain u had ..but dad I am sure God will give you the best place where I want to be with you always .Love u dad u r not of my mind even for a second though iam busy in raising my kids and Dad as u wanted my kids to be I had tried my best to make them and u know how wonderful kids they are dad ..God had blessed be with a good father and such wonderful kids what more will I ask for dad ..only that I need a little space in ur feet .dad when Dr told it will take 2 weeks more i felt very bad i dont want u to be in pain for a second dad so please use your will power and get well soon for me i always need u my dad with out you you know i cant take any decision.come back towards life completely dad anyone need u or not i need u the most so please before my birthday u get normal and this time my gift will be ur health and complete normal.You know dad how i had lived my life if u were not there what would have happened to me ..i love u more than any thing on this planet dad please get well soon and that will be my birthday gift i dont want any thing i want you dad .i want u to know how much i love u .
As u always say DDD.
Yours Dearest Darling Daughter
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score: 9.48946

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 5

tags: 0%
language: en

He sometimes feel certain sensations which she did not understand the reason ..
At the moment, she feels weak and has no more strength. She lets destroy slowly not knowing if it will come out ... She cries and feels really bad .. She does not know what to do to relieve this pain, she locks herself in her little bubble until someone out of there .. She loses hope but remains determined to wait around .. Everything becomes black. She does not understand why she feels the sensation of loneliness, weakness ..
So she stays there, waiting as the hours pass ...
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score: 9.53147

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 6

tags: ☆☆
language: en

Look at all these people around her who advance in their lives. She observed all day and tries to imagine the same situation. She dreams that someone stops in front of her and talk to her , just talk to him but nothing. She continues to watch. She looks at her couples so cute, these best friends who clap their laughter between friends and then she would also find a link like these girls having fun being said. But thinking one minute to people around her, she realizes that there are fewer and fewer people to whom she can confide , the only people left are his friends with whom she found a small smile is false. Smile while at the bottom of it , she would be able to release all the tears just waiting to slide down her cheeks , she would scream but did not because it would be a sign of weakness against the other , those who the minimal look without noticing that behind this smile , this mask , hiding tears . She had hoped that this kind of sensations do not happen again but life does not or little gifts. She starts once more a ritual that will destroy but his only solution is to try to get out of there . It is perhaps too many times but it will still try to come out even if his hopes have disappeared. She does not expect anything from it , nothing of the person she has become. Yes now , because it was not like that before. As the days pass the more it changes, but not in the positive ..
Injury, it is linked to love or friendship, can destroy us. It can destroy us physically but also morally ...
" Losing a loved one is losing a piece of his life, a piece of a puzzle that can not be finished and will forever remain unfinished in the depths of our heart ..."
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score: 9.68632

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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 12

language: en

Safar "TANHA" Nahi Karte,,
Suno "AISA" Nahi Karte...

Chalo tum "RAAZ" ho Apna,
Tumhen "AFSHAAN" nahi Karte...

Suno jis ka "MUQDDAR" ho,
Usey "CHORA" nahi Karte...

Jise "SHAFFAF" Rakhna ho,
Usey "MAILA" nahi Karte...

Jo bas jata hai "DHARKAN" me,
Usey "BHOOLA" nahi Karty...

Kisi ko "DIL" dete waqat,
Bahut "SOCHA" nahi Karte...

Jo pehle se hi "TANHA" ho,
Usey "TANHA" nahi Karte...

Suno "YADEEN" Sataengi,
Magar "ROYA" nahi Karte...

Suno tum "YAAD" aate ho,
Aur hum "SOYA" nahi Karte...!!!
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on: Apr 12, 2014
ratings: 5

language: en

This is the greatest night ever
Let us hold back a little longer
Waters of darkness from this shore
The beautiful island, the paradisal spot
The haunt of pleasure and pain
That we must leave
Whether we do or we don't
All this will never come again.

More time, Oh ! just a little more
Till we stretch to the limits of our being
The taut heart break
Bursting the bonds of breath
Shattering the wall
Between us and our world
And we awake
Out of the dreams of self
Into the truth of all
The price for which is death.

Nothing is quite fulfilled
Nothing is really lost
The present and the past become as one
Moved amidst the two societies
While we are thronged with nostalgic memories
And learn at last
The dead are the ones who never die.

A tap on the door
A dusky lady comes alone
Whispers in her husky tone
Honey ! Stop rocking
It's now time to come.
I follow the trail marked out by her
Putting an end to my honeymoon fever.
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